Austin Warwick

Veteran Poet - 1,807 Points (07/21/97 / Montgomery Alabama)

Rain - Poem by Austin Warwick

Watching the rain
Keeps me sane.

Topic(s) of this poem: couplet, nature, rain

Form: Couplet

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  • Kim Barney (12/7/2015 11:05:00 AM)

    Nice couplet. However, I would get rid of the period after RAIN so that it is just one sentence:
    Watching the rain
    Keeps me sane.
    You could also remove the capital letter from the word KEEPS or just leave it there, since many poets capitalize the first word of every line anyway. Sometimes I do that, and sometimes I don't.
    Keep writing.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 17, 2015

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