Friday, August 7, 2020

Rain Comments

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I stand in a puddle with my feet
to the puddle - that's his job
he comes out with a coated tail
the web that smells on my feet
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Dan Uriel
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 August 2020

It rains to grow mud on my feet beets, a pious whitewash and I listen to my thinking the rain falls on the barefoot fall, fall, for that is h is business. very nice poem. rain, nature, its effects and your wonderful presentation. tony

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