Friday, March 3, 2006

Rain Is A Woman Comments

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she likes to tease
she likes to please
she wants to kiss you
with her dewy lips
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a nobody named maui
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Meghan - 24 December 2006

what a beautiful poem. I love the subject and your comparison. beautiful. Meghan

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***** ********* 04 March 2006

Those last words are so ironic maui, To be hated because you love, is the saddest emotion to deal with, but love as you say is rain and a woman. Very nice work. 10 from Tai in love

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