Wednesday, February 15, 2017

Rainbows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Becoming as cold
As the depths of the abyss
Teetering on the edge
Of the precipice
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Roshnie Kewal
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Roshnie Kewal 15 February 2017

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This piece actually took me a few months to put together.

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Chinedu Dike 15 February 2017

Piece of elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Beautiful poem nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. An insightful depiction of depression as loss of sunshine in a life at its deplorable low ebb. Thanks for sharing.

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Roshnie Kewal 15 February 2017

Thank you so much

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