Monday, September 23, 2013

Re: The Sting Of Betrayal Comments

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Where is the truth in words you speak
Is your heart so cold it can not bleed
Look in the mirror, see the dark in your eyes
You will see your heart full of lies
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Khairul Ahsan 05 October 2013

'It is the sting of betrayal, The hurt, the pain I laugh at you, no pain, no gain.' Well said, but forgiveness is better.

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David Clements 23 September 2013

very well written looking forward to reading more of your work

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Ace Of Black Hearts 23 September 2013

An in that moment of flesh upon flesh. Not one but two souls are lost. Sucked dry. A fading light. Upon fighting monsters be careful less you become thee monster.

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