Tuesday, April 23, 2019

Reaching Your World Comments

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No connection, three months passed by
Days, nights, no time didn't I cry
Yearning for your warmth, lips and hands
Seeing you here, but couldn't touch
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Rishina Cabillo
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Unnikrishnan E S 29 January 2020

Loved this poem: No connection, three months passed by Days, nights, no time didn't I cry. “No time didn’t I cry”. The double negative makes it exquisite

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 December 2019

Now, it's a ghost, haunting me Brings me to the deep, I've ne'r been Tears won't stop, until you are here This heart of mine is ‘bout to cleave. imagination leading the reader to truths. tony

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