Tuesday, September 26, 2006

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I cast a stone at the sky
hoping for some kind of sound
A phantom feeling answered me
rain on rainy ground
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alex haywood
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Foster Blaine 26 September 2006

i enjoyed this one. seeking more, getting nothing and finding poetry in the emptiness of your search. but, i think the last 5 lines confuse the entire whole.. it's as if you're trying to end on a happy note when nothing was really happy. just my opinion- i like this piece none the less. foster

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Séamus Fox 26 September 2006

Beautiful piece Alex love the images created by this piece. Séamus

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