i enjoyed this one. seeking more, getting nothing and finding poetry in the emptiness of your search. but, i think the last 5 lines confuse the entire whole.. it's as if you're trying to end on a happy note when nothing was really happy. just my opinion- i like this piece none the less.
foster
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i enjoyed this one. seeking more, getting nothing and finding poetry in the emptiness of your search. but, i think the last 5 lines confuse the entire whole.. it's as if you're trying to end on a happy note when nothing was really happy. just my opinion- i like this piece none the less. foster