Rebirth Comments

Then took an oath to live and thrive To start anew. A great sense of rebirth while living......... like your determination to create a new future in spite of negative experiences.. tony.

Alexandra, may I ask: do you write haiku? if so, let me know if you like to join a poetry project..

8 lines that nicely draw the speaker's feeling, juxtaposing images of the ocean's waves crushing against the rocky coast with a new start..