Redemption Poem by Gary Witt

Redemption

Rating: 5.0


curb lined with concrete cylinders:
two-foot high pedestals, evenly spaced,
that keep the cars off the sidewalk.

from nowhere this bicyclist
rears up on his hind wheel,
propels himself head-long
toward one pedestal, and
plops his front wheel over it,
wedging the concrete pillow
between his tires.

one man laughs;
two women hope he’s not hurt.

he doesn't fall but sticks there, hovering;
then with an awkward dismount,
he pulls the bike from its pedestal wedgie,
and circles around slowly
performing the same move again.

more people are starting to giggle and point.

he sees them, he hears them,
he circles around,
then up on his hind wheel
he seemingly floats,
landing his rear tire
atop the pedestal,
his front tire still in the air;
balanced, stable, proud.

on his rear tire he hops
to the second pedestal
and then to the third,
pausing to savor each landing.

both wheels back on the pavement,
he rides away.

people applaud,
some cheer.
he is down the street now
and does not hear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 19 March 2008

You've got me standing stock still on the pavement (sidewalk - curb) there Gary, watching this fascinating exercise: - man struggling to put himself on a pedestal, and experiencing the emotions that such an achievement generates, as spectators stand tensely by in this subdued high energy situation.. .. There's a touch of something akin to the mystical in this in how you've propelled the extraordinary into a mundane scene... it's a fresh angle/viewpoint on rarely treated material these days..and savoured by this reader as the experience was by the cyclist.... and, briskly, matter of factly presented it has great attention grabbing power matching the scenario you project... Glad I eventually remembered to call round here.. I will be back soon Mr Witt. This is quality participation poetry.. regards, jim

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