A Most Delicious Strawberry Poem by Gary Witt

A Most Delicious Strawberry

Rating: 4.5


You have your game-face on again;
The don’t-mess-with-me face that comes
With its own combative attitude.
Not pleased with being pleased,
You seem incapable of a smile;
Not a cheek-aching, ab-cramping,
Incontinent belly-laugh,
But something as simple as a smile.

Can you scowl in the presence
Of a four year old wearing
A Halloween costume
With cape?
Can you frown under the patient,
Steady, brown-eyed stare of a
Labrador coveting
Your plate?

Have you forgotten how to savor
The simple strawberry?

The story goes, a man in India,
While walking through the woods,
Encountered a tiger.
Well, being a wise man,
And quite astute,
He precipitously turned
And fled.
The tiger, with his own degree
Of wisdom and perspicacity,
And with a feline sense of humor,
Gave chase,
Until the man came to a cliff and jumped;
No blink, no pause, just a leap,
And falling, grabbed onto a sapling.
Hanging there, feet dangling
(Like a participle)
With one fist wrapped
Around the most paltry of sprigs,
The man spotted a strawberry
Growing nearby
Which he immediately picked
And ate.
It was a most delicious strawberry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 06 August 2009

Ah, yes, those little 'sweet things' in life that somehow we miss...and we are the poorer for having missed them! Great write.

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Andrew Blakemore 02 August 2009

A lovely story Gary, and a pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew

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Duh Huh 04 May 2009

I just totally love this poem. Its as delicious as the strawberry and i am taking it with me :) A definite 10 and now another of my favs. Thank you.

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That's so great, I loved it!

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Linda Ori 13 July 2008

Being analytical as I am, I'm wondering which hand he picked the strawberry with, and is he still hanging, or did he trade his life for one last delicious experience? A totally wonderful reading experience, juicy and luscious as that plump strawberry! Linda :)

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 08 September 2011

I have no idea why I am just reading this but I love it! A profound message I think... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Shadow Girl 10 June 2011

Nice writing good flow to it :)

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Chuck Audette 12 May 2011

Thoroughly enjoyed this cliffhanger of a story. 'Like a participle' made me laugh. -chuck

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Ruth Walters 20 September 2009

I wrote a poem about a strawberry once, I'll fish it out for you but liked this poem and especially liked the intro'. There are some people who just scowl at the whole world.... I despise that. Ruthy

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Zeinab Sherif 15 August 2009

mmmmmmmmm, a very delicious poem keep it up.10+++

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