I’m always told that you only live once
Make the most of all you try
That fact isn’t what’s bothering me
It’s how long you live after you ‘die’
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Very good poem. I was relating up and to the point where you said 'And that now I am the girl I was before'. Because I am not a girl, this took away my suspension of disbelief. Otherwise great poem, and while I won't tell you don't tell people your a girl, gender neutral language is often helpful.
Anyways. Good poem.8/10
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Very good poem. I was relating up and to the point where you said 'And that now I am the girl I was before'. Because I am not a girl, this took away my suspension of disbelief. Otherwise great poem, and while I won't tell you don't tell people your a girl, gender neutral language is often helpful. Anyways. Good poem.8/10