Sunday, September 20, 2009

Relax Comments

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Sitting alone in a quiet place
Defining 'What is life'
Looking far beyond at nothing.
Wondrin' what kind of future is there to face
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EMMALINE ORTIZ
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 September 2009

Nice poem. Sublimation is the essence. Keep pondering and writing... Best Wishes Naseer

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 September 2009

This is a perfectly wonderful piece of writing (a good poem): I love it. Relax and keep on writing.

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R.k Das 22 September 2009

such a personal dilemma described in the poem is so natural and human, , , there are such moment when one has to sit and ponder, , , and though it is very hard to 'relax' thanx for such a nice poem, ,

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EMMALINE ORTIZ

EMMALINE ORTIZ

Manila, Philippines
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