Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, December 2, 2013

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It is real curse if you fail
The knowledge to acquire or avail
Since it is considered as another birth
It’s usefulness for whole of life till death
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Fulfillment Mikah White3 minutes ago I think this is a very good poem. Our greatest qualities are within ourselves. A little work on grammar would make this work great. Comment +1 shows that material objects are not what we need for happiness in life

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Buck Ramper6 minutes ago overall good mentality of why material possesions are not what make a person happy Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

s ago not my type of poem, but was good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

It is real curse if you fail The knowledge to acquire or avail

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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