REMARK Poem by Maura Dooley

REMARK

Rating: 5.0


We had been a long time busy
a little sad maybe,
preoccupied,
then I said something dry
perhaps you'd call it

and you laughed
in a way
that made me
stop and stare.

Sudden, rich and startling
it turned my head
and such a flood of happiness was there

that here was something I could do.
Something I'd forgotten I could do.

Here, take it from me,
breathe on it
till it shines
and on a darker day
we might see the world more kindly
through it it might light the way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
SOMA CHAUDHURI 11 May 2021

I love this poem. Beautifully conveys the subtlety of human emotions. 'that here was something I could do. Something I'd forgotten I could do.' has touched me. The last two lines 'we might see the world more kindly through it it might light the way.' are marvellous! ! ....

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