Saturday, August 13, 2005

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I, the taster of late autumns,
hardly remembering the tobacco flower
spying the shivering hoary lake –
can sometimes hear my heartbeat.
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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 13 August 2005

Beautiful words, Dan. 'At daybreak – only the lamp of the old man polishing lenses and the poet's narrow window are still tempting the fireflies; while the rose leans forward, between verbs, against our engraved arms; ' - This is exquisite writing.

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K Q 13 August 2005

when silence is a swan that has turned away from dying and the moon is drying up her wings like a newborn butterfly... I love your taste of autumn!

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Dan Danila

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