Tuesday, February 5, 2008

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Remember those times we laughed and played along the sandy beach
Remember those times we use to try catch the stars even those beyond our reach
Remember those times we danced all night until the break of dawn
Remember those times we whispered together sealing secrets sworn
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Danny Archer 07 February 2008

nice use nof iambic pentamitor... good pace and nice imagery

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