Friday, February 8, 2008

Remember Comments

Rating: 4.6

when the sun is shinging down,
remember me
when the stars are shinging bright,
remember how things used to be
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Maggie Wolf
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Mary Gordley 09 February 2008

Margot this is enchanting your use of repetition really enhanced what were already beautiful thoughts. Thank you.

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