Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Remember Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I find sweet solace in the quiet calm
I breathe in deep and feel the cool damp on my lungs.
As tears sting my eyes I breathe in memories of you.
At the end of our dock looking over our lake I look in the water and see your reflection.
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Khirod Dalpati 16 September 2017

Right from the bottom of the heart. Beautiful poem

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 May 2011

I really liked the poem. Beautifully written with nice imagery. Excellent and interesting write. A fine...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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