Friday, September 12, 2008

Remembrance Comments

Rating: 5.0

hearts broken for so long, its becoming confused
push' n and pull me, im being badly abused
all they want is what i wont give, so im feelin hella used
beat me, slap me, tear me apart
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Lola Romero
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Tai Chi Italy 12 September 2008

Although the language was a little er! lol the sentiments and the rhythme was all there. I know this scenario, as I can imagine many twenty first century writers do....it is the net that catches us, we have to be grateful for small mercies such as the crime you describe of feeling so so good. Smiling at you Tai, not posting here yet....they are cleaning the site right now for my return! lol

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