Monday, July 4, 2011

Reverence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Expunging the pain that rails the soul
Imposed by demons of theocracy’s creation
To spur into damnation wistful thoughts by free minds
Toward reward of flesh given to life senses
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Joseph PARASCANDALO
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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