Sunday, January 24, 2010

Rhyme: This Beautiful Place Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feel God's love flow from heaven above,
Riding sunbeams it filters through trees;
Shimmering light mirrors water like glass,
One graceful, white swan swims peacefully.
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Caryl Ramsdale
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Jean Dament 24 January 2010

This one was sweet & beautiful & it gave the reader some peace just reading it. I gave it a 10 but it didn't show up. In fact I give most of your poems a 10. lol Spiritsong

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