Friday, May 2, 2008

Ripples In The Mind Comments

Rating: 4.5

Nothing but misconceptions,
a seeming hardness of touch
where lies but minute particles.
All in a great expanse of space
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David Taylor
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R H 02 May 2008

A deeply philosophical write here David where night's allure beguiles - drawing your eye, igniting the mind and releasing the emotions... I thought the final two stanza's had a particularly meditative feel to them. Some lovely contrasts too - the 'fullness of love' 'throughout the flatness of a material world' stood out esp. Great insight and introspection conveyed in flowing, meditative style. justine.

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