Wednesday, April 15, 2009

'Rising...' Comments

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Rising
from sleep
naked, the sun
and I glimpse
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Paul Hansford 02 May 2009

Haiku by feel if not by form. The notion of the sun (as well as the writer) rising from sleep naked is a neat image, and I suspect 'Blinding! ' is used in a literal and a slang sense (as 'Fantastic! ') . Double meanings like these add richness to a poem.

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