Robin's Retreat Poem by Kevin Eaglesfield

Robin's Retreat



He staggered, stumbled, struggled onward,
Strapped arm pulsing, burning, raw.
Matted, sweat-caked, reeling, lurching,
Clothing rank and tunic gore.

He fell again, half-sobbing lay there,
Fingers clawing leaves and mud,
Found a branch and grunted upright,
Shufffled gasping through the wood.

At times, the men he'd just left empty
Rushed him, grim-faced, black knives drawn.
Cursing, shouting, flailing weakly,
Phantom soldiers smoke was shorn.

But each time left him further deathly,
Drunken vision tunnelled more.
Ringing clamoured, thought recoiled as
Once again he hit the floor.

Moonless, furtive three were poaching,
Guarded, found the man near gone.
One's quick fingers started working,
One ran home, and one for John.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 03 November 2008

Now this one leaves me guessing a bit Kev... we are I take it in Sherwood of the forest kind. the poorly man in question must be the Robin of fame in those parts. The John in the last line is the last line of attack of the three merciless vagabonds who may be the Sheriff himself no less- oh dear am I going up a gum tree here in the middle of Sherwood.? Come and rescue me Kev. A great read though - - loved being there. Fay.

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