Rock (No Hiding Place) Poem by Christine Austin Cole

Rock (No Hiding Place)

Rating: 5.0


Is it petty, I wonder…

The package of perpetual irritants
That I seem to continually lay down…
The litany of minor lamentations,
Unwrapped from tin foil
And set out on the blanket
Before you… again, again.
I wonder if it bothers you, asking
On occasion if it does – only
To lose your answer
Underneath the worry
That you might not know
Why my voice quivers so
Everytime I do.

So, I ask again,
And then…

Again, I worry
That I’m

Burdening you.

~ ~ ~

Before a rock, by a river, ‘neath a tree –
A picnic of my burdens,

You,

Me…

Singing, still,
That same old song

As time… rolls… on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Dragano 19 September 2008

beautiful... the sing song and chit chat litany of minor complaints masking what? for one thing: the very basic, very scary vulnerabilty of love

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~ Jon London ~ 30 May 2008

Christine, This is amazing...I mean really amazing, you've got the words...excellent piece. *10* from me best wishes Jon

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