Ruined Poem by Manuel Martinez

Ruined



Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
You said you loved me,
But i really hate you.

If you had loved me,
you wouldn't have lied.
And everything we had,
wouldn't have died.

But love cheer up,
Today's a new day.
Maybe We'll smile,
And forget yesterday.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This isn't for you mi amor :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Titi Dale 07 January 2013

Hi Manuel! This is a great poem! You express your emotions well and you also rhyme well. This is a great poem changed from the original one :) Tiegan

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