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Sacred Souls. Comments

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When a dust rises when in dark,
Can you see it on the hills?
Of this world’s drama which we live in,
Just tolerated and I’m living on the edge,
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AbdiSaber Yusuf
collide Oceans Forgiveness monsters
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Michael Walker 27 May 2015

A convincing expression of religious belief. Belief in Allah, forgiveness, and eternal paradise to live in. I suggest that 'I can sense the victory's coming' would be better than 'smell'. That's how I see it. Michael Walker.

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Abdisaber Yusuf 04 June 2015

Thank you!

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