Friday, September 12, 2008

.......Sacrilige...Or However You Spell That...Hehehehe Comments

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What should I cry, in lines,
That I will not cry, in eyes?

Rather be daft, and laugh
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elysabeth faslund
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Alison Cassidy 13 September 2008

Eloquent and succinct, you offer the reader a lot more than a surface read might suggest. Daft is such a wonderful word too. Great internal rhyming too. Love this. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Elysabeth Faslund 12 September 2008

You BET it's tongue in words...uh, cheeky...uh, cheek! ! !

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C H Sund 12 September 2008

First two lines...superb! I sense some tongue in cheek here!

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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