Safar Poem by mayank rakesh

Safar

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kisi alfaaz ki itni tasheer ni jo meri kumbat ko suljha de,
kisi awaaz ki itni bndis ni jo mujhe sama le.
chah le smana,
pr meri taraf bdhta hr kdam tujhse meri doori bdhata h,
rok lo jitna pr plko ka jaam ankho se chalak jata h.

abhi tk uljha hun khudko paane ki rahon me,
brsate bit gyi teri jhulfo ki ghani chaon me.
bs arj meri aj yhi jubaani h
mil jaye ulfate pharistaani h..
mr jao us safar ki rahon me,
jaha se suru hoti teri kahani h.

Sunday, July 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 July 2018

Zabardast aaghaaz hai, mayank. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 30 July 2018

बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने. बहुत भावपूर्ण. कुछ जगह उच्चारण के अनुसार स्पेलिंग ठीक कर लें. kumbat और pharistaani से क्या तात्पर्य है? धन्यवाद, मित्र. tasheer = taseer / suru = shuru

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Mayank Rakesh 30 July 2018

tasheer ka mtlb impression ya effect kumbat ka mtlb hua uljhan

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