Sunday, July 29, 2018

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kisi alfaaz ki itni tasheer ni jo meri kumbat ko suljha de,
kisi awaaz ki itni bndis ni jo mujhe sama le.
chah le smana,
pr meri taraf bdhta hr kdam tujhse meri doori bdhata h,
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mayank rakesh
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 July 2018

Zabardast aaghaaz hai, mayank. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 30 July 2018

बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने. बहुत भावपूर्ण. कुछ जगह उच्चारण के अनुसार स्पेलिंग ठीक कर लें. kumbat और pharistaani से क्या तात्पर्य है? धन्यवाद, मित्र. tasheer = taseer / suru = shuru

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Mayank Rakesh 30 July 2018

tasheer ka mtlb impression ya effect kumbat ka mtlb hua uljhan

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