Sunday, August 21, 2011

Salt Skin Comments

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A salt skin
Covers us both
Dried overnight
From sweat
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John Paul Butler
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Marva Seaton 21 August 2011

John I like your poem I get what you are trying to put across however, the fourth line instead of 'our clay within' you could have put 'as if formed from clay'' just a thought, still I liked it anyway.

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John Paul Butler

John Paul Butler

Douglas, Isle of Man
John Paul Butler
John Paul Butler
Douglas, Isle of Man
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