Saturday, May 3, 2008

Saying Something.. Comments

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Saying Something..


By Asmai Fathelbab
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Asmai Fathelbab
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You've been able to capture and convey the thoughts completely. However I suggest you read the work of other poets and get some basic familiarity; especially for pauses and run-ons etc.. hugs emancipate

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