navami patil


Scar - Poem by navami patil

Here falls a water droplet
from a small hole
And gets added up
To drop down from a curve.

First passes the straight
That's know for its pride
As it supports the curve
Adding more to it.

Second come the curve
That blooms up others
Changes its shape
to upside down

Lastly passes down
To make an end
Up comes the five sticks
To wipe it of the bumps.

I know u drop down
Only to clear my vision
Not to get my hopes down.

So do u create a scar
A scar on the red
And note to the white
Only for better

Scars that brighten me
Only visible to me.

by
Navami.V.Patil

Topic(s) of this poem: tears

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

for a better understanding just read below
first curve -eye
water droplet -tear
pride, straight-nose
second curve-smile
five sticks -fingers
bumps- cheeks
red-heart
white -brain

its like every bad time we feel like left alone and tears accompany us and we dont understand why does this happen but i feel they just come out to make our vision more clear so then we rise up for next challenge and its gd to cry lol crazy but true

Comments about Scar by navami patil

  • Kelly Kurt (9/18/2015 1:05:00 PM)


    Nicely done, Navami. Yes, crying can be cathartic and restorative (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 18, 2015



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