Friday, March 28, 2014

Scaring Enemies Away [revised] Comments

Rating: 3.5

Hurriedly left my work station ashamed to admit its
where I sit; a tornado couldn’t have wrought havoc
as effectively - & tomorrow is fumigation day! What
will the cockroach squad say, or those ponderous
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 01 April 2014

Poem flows nicely. Love the sentence: my plate with crumbs. Will the dainty china blind them to dirt. Nice piece.

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