Friday, September 25, 2009

Scarlet Cloak Comments

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The scarlet cloak of loneliness
covers my sorrowed soul
and my gentle heart is benign
to any chosen fact.
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David Harris
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Fantastic imagery on this one David with the scarlet cloak smothering you. Scarlet is such a rich color and I can see how it can overpower other colors. Top marks! love Karin

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Aziz Alkaabi 25 September 2009

Beautiful verses here, David And the hue of colours will also bring some cheerful encounters for a very observing poet, Aziz

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Carol Gall 25 September 2009

great write yes that scarlet cloak 10

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David Harris

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