Scars Poem by Tammie LilAimo

Scars



I wanna fight
I wanna push
I wanna heel
I want these scars to fade
I want them to disapear
Scars that shine so bright
Scars that never fail
Scars that show my life.

They llie on my hand
just like a tattoo.
There for my life
a souveniar i cant forget
cuts so deep,
watching them burn each night
unreconisable Tales
telling one each day
one seems to change
two seem to change
a tale becomes a life,
but then they look down at your hand.

I wanna fight
I wanna push
I wanna heel
I want these scars to fade
I want them to disapear
Scars that shine so bright
Scars that never fail
Scars that show my life.

An echo of the past
lies to be shown,
a blur of insperation
that will never let go
it likes to be the only one
never to be alone,
its everything i dont want
shines

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
to be continued
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 16 December 2012

Some significant things to think over from that. Honestly expressing the conflict and some drivers. A tad ambiguous round the middle maybe but then again it's past midnight so might be me... Ta.

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