Friday, May 13, 2016

Scars Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look at me, you couldn't guess
That my universe is quite a mess
You couldn't see the crashing cars
That leave so many invisible scars
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Alex Cairnie
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Tom Billsborough 13 May 2016

Brilliant last line, Alex. and the rhythm is lyrical and well controlled. Looks like you're going to have to stick another ten in your kit bag! Well done. A deeply honest piece. Tom billsborough

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