Monday, April 22, 2013

Second Beat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hello to you, you second beat
That aches in my poor heart
Oh how it’s been so long ago
Before you and I did part.
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Genevieve Pilat
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Kevin Patrick 22 April 2013

I normally dont comment on love poems, but this was to good not to mention, I love the first stanza, and the closing in fact if I werent such a cynic I would cry. A lovely write

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Genevieve Pilat

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