Saturday, May 10, 2008

Secret Mission Comments

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I had secret missions, under the snow and land,
Into the war I forget my news of loneliness
And schedules of peace shall overwhelm me in ampleness,
In a battle of prowess, offered by the Above and the sand.
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Naveed Akram
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Aisha Love 10 May 2008

this is a very good poem the last line is very deep

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Naveed Akram

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