Seedlings Of Eternity Comments

Poem is true depiction of life. The cyclic pattern of life, death and

A nice picturization of different roles of a human being to be staged in life....

A good start with a nice poem, Jayakrishnan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

She shouted the vend, but her call resounded as a long wail as if telling the untold tale of the eternal layers of her life-in-death.........pulling the cart..... the old father, , the young girl, her child.... thank you sir for observing that and writing a poem like this.. it evokes the sense of mercy in one who reads it...... thank you very much. tony