Friday, May 15, 2009

Self Imprisoned Comments

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You’re a Clean Cut American Boy
With russet locks and pristine grin
You are kind-gentle and oh so coy
Full of Life and contented to win
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Brian Matico
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Elsa Bennett 15 May 2009

i really like how this poem develops and the way the different facets of this person are slowly shown. It's an interesting concept and well-executed.

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