Sentenced Poem by Tin Can

Sentenced

Rating: 4.8


If I were your prisoner,
Locked in your heart I'd want to be,
Knowing, that caged there,
You'd forever be close to me.
My sentence I would serve.
The stretch I would bear.
For with you as my jailer,
I just would not care.

Together we we'd be quartered.
Visiting times would never pass.
For I'd be attached to your aorta,
Chambered, by a surgical graft.
At the end of my time,
Release, I would not need.
Imprisoned in your heart I'd rather be,
As opposed to being freed.

Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When you want to be with someone their very being consumes you. They don't always know how you feel about them or the effect they have on you. They encase your very being. You want to be locked away, just you and them.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 October 2015

A good depiction of profound feeling of love, well articulated and insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. Love is a spiritual experience - a voyage of pure bliss that affects all and sundry immensely. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Winston. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Tin Can

Tin Can

Trowbridge Wiltshire UK
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