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Separation from you gave me the pain, deep as ocean.
My precious tears like drops of blood, valuable as gem.
Are falling, flowing, flooding like waves.
Like Salt, Washing away my pain.
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Towseef Amin Dar
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Koffi B Sossou 01 February 2024

Nice and deep poem. I think the endless 'hope' makes it worst.

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Congratulations on Poem Of The Day recognition.

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