Sunday, May 29, 2016

September Girls Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shaky hands
Restless hearts
Withdrawn girls on cold September nights
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Adrianna La Flash
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2016

Not slow nor calm No they are falling hard From the heavens.....very symbolic of depression, of being lost, sadness. a very good poem since it expresses clearly what u wanted. th ankyou. tony

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 May 2016

'' Poor little September girls '' - povere piccole ragazze settembrine.. (in Italian) You write to be born in September 21 2000.. really young, but very good already.. Keep on writing, Adrianna and thanks for sharing

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