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If the future was more kind
without misfortune few deny
perhaps the fear would be removed
from procreation of blessed broods
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Sean Green
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 June 2020

Nice poem. A clear message too. But rarely grand parents are irresponsible. 'the elders who will fall away are the ones that had betrayed now future parents hesitate to set a sentence of doomed fate...is a nice stanza. Thanks for posting.

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