Monday, April 13, 2009

Setting Sun Comments

Rating: 4.3

Crystal clear, turquoise waves,
Bubble a tranquil tune,
Sighing as it sings to the ruby sun setting in the sky.
The sparkling rays stained the sky a brilliant crimson,
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Eleanor Ransom
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Sue Sie 13 April 2009

How very well expressed this is...love it...well done...10

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Robert Page 13 April 2009

Wow. An amazing vision, with an amazingly high vocabulary. Great job.

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