Seven Days Poem by Robin Longstrike

Seven Days



Seven days of anger
Seven days of fear
Seven days of pain
Seven days of misery

They tell me I am here,
But I am not.
They tell me I am a good person,
But yet I feel like I am a jerk.

Seven days I couldn't die
I couldn't die from anger
I couldn't die from fear
I couldn't die from pain
I couldn't die from misery

On the seventh day
I discover that,
all my anger, all my fears,
all my pain, all my misery
alll of it,

is just a dream.

Saturday, May 29, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,fear,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robin Longstrike 29 May 2010

It is my first poem ever, so please leave your opinion about it. And some hints and tips are always welcome. :)

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