Thursday, May 31, 2012

Sex And Murder Comments

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I loved you
So i did something about it
I tore your shirt
I pulled your pants
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jackie Curtis
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Adeline Foster 26 August 2012

A comment on diction? Well yes, and yet you leave us hanging. Read mine - lies - Adeline

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Gaylord Munemo 07 June 2012

short and precise, yet so interesting. Good diction and conclusion

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