Shadow Poem by aida melesse

Shadow

Rating: 4.0


A shadow in the night
that's what you are to me
a flick of light
with my weak eyes
that's what I see
can you leap out from your hiding place
and show me your face?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 26 November 2010

So short but, with so much inside. Great write and I love your ending. Kept me thinking after I read it. Beautifully done 10+++

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Afzal Shauq 28 July 2010

A shadow in the night that's what you are to me a flick of light with my weak eyes that's what I see can you leap out from your hiding place and show me your face? fantastic and meaningful...short but having a long story behind..really enjoyed it a lot..well done

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