Monday, March 9, 2009

Shaking In Red (Song) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Shaking in red, in red, in red
To the edge of the dream, of the dream
We can’t be separated
Already, every time when I’m stifled to death after I give up again and again
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Mark R Slaughter 11 March 2009

Again, a distinct style of abstract metaphors although I note a recurring theme of dreams in your songs - which further indicates you ability to mind-drift. These lyrics a well-constructed and demonstrate your talent. I would guess that you a relatively young and therefore you have a lot of potential. Keep writing annie. Mark

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